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Hello! My name is Zechariah, and I aim to give fair and helpful critiques. This process involves me explaining what I personally see as...


P.S. I will be referring to your drawing as Lando. Eyes: The entire eyes are way too big. even for Lando. The irises both have differen...


The idea you are trying to convey; that the liberal left and the media all expected Trump to lose and the false positivity they exhibit...

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I once had a passion for drawing but now it's gone. I am only passionate about seeing art and the process, and watching/making it improve. With my keen eye for detail and love for helping, I seek to aid my fellow deviants improve through the usage of critiques, forums and friendship.

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Hello! My name is Zechariah, and I aim to give fair and helpful critiques. This process involves me explaining what I personally see as flaws/mistakes (AND WHY THEY ARE WRONG) and then suggesting ways to improve/fix them. As the artist, you are entitled to your own styles and opinions and may disagree with w.e I say. But I hope you still find my critique fair :}

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The ear is wayyy too small in length (top to bottom) and width(side to side). The ear should be about the length of the eyebrow to the noseline. Also, the ear needs to be moderately wider. The eyes are a tad too big for the face and too spaced out. An average space between the eyes is equivalent to one eye. The eye is supposed to be placed approximately halfway of the head/face. The lips are also very large, and could use some shrinkage. Overall head structure/skull structure seems to be too top heavy. I suggest a shrinkage of size on that part.
ARMS=Since the body is so large, it is difficult to determine if the arms are too short or too long but the hands are definitely too small. The left hand can cover one eye. When in reality, hands should have half or more of the face unless this is an infant/child. The right side's hand looks better. The left arm when it connects the bicep to the forearm, it looks very unusually thin and boney.
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this figure is too huge in proportion to any of her features. To "fix" this drawing, you have to first figure out what is the definitive size of your character. The pelvis bone seems really low, I suggest you raise it higher. Her breasts look too lopsided or uneven. Both breasts must follow the laws of gravity. Finally, the arms do not have the same muscle tone as her abs. Her abdominal muscles are huge and defined (albeit missing obliques and such) whilst her arms are really thin. When drawing, make sure to take into consideration muscle and fat and that people carry more of it in some places and less in others, but if there's a lot of fat on one place, there's gurantee to be some fat in other places. Even if this includes broadening her shoulders

I suggest you study the form and structures of the human body and it's extremities. This includes anatomy/proportion research. Overall you did an excellent job, and I look forward to more of your art.
P.S. I will be referring to your drawing as Lando.

Eyes: The entire eyes are way too big. even for Lando. The irises both have different shapes, which shouldn't happen at this angle/perspective. Also, it appears he has a lazy eye in this drawing so that should be fixed as well.

Nose: Given the angle at which Lando is looking, his nose should be more of a 3/4 angle. The nose looks like it wants to be a frontal-facing nose or even facing the opposite way of which you intended.

Ear: The inside of an ear doesn't look like that and the shape of the ear itself is wider and less cylinder.

Lips: Pay attention to the folds of the lip. Lando's lips are flat and do not convey the third dimensional aspect of reality. The whole image feels rather flat but the shading gives the illusion of depth.

I tried not to advise on things too obvious because if you compare the artwork with the reference, you will notice it too. Make sure to do this often and take people's critiques wisely. Also, you have a great potential I'll tell you that right now. This is amazing for your level, and it can be even better. Good job!
The idea you are trying to convey; that the liberal left and the media all expected Trump to lose and the false positivity they exhibited..is a great one. Showing the hypocrisy of the mainstream media and the people who claim to "love Trump's hate"..it's truly amazing. However, the art itself is very basic and uninteresting. For example, the top left image is just two reports with a stock background behind them. The background should be happier and more expressive. Also, if we look at the bottom right panel, we see a group of Hillary supporters who are shown to look evil and monstrous. I don't think this was a right choice, to convey the message that was intended. I suggest working on your fundamental anatomy and proportions and you can go far. Great vision, just a lack of execution. The pictures just look boring.

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Null-Entity Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
Thankyou Kindly For The Watch :D
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thespiritprevails Featured By Owner 3 days ago
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thespiritprevails Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2017
No problem
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